12 mars 2009
To understand to be understood... kind of ...
11 mars 2009
yawns :O
06 mars 2009
Chinese... 华人讲汉语
Dainty, Pure, Eyes
The look of innocence
Behind it all
A cruel, cruel heart.
Come out from the grave, you Vamp! You Tramp!
I will seek you.
The rotting waste beneath
The cold hard, hard cover.
Rain, a better than you,
The crow cries foul
The sky a blood red.
A blossom with
Fangs.
Let the Bitter Waves
Hit you.
Your tongue
Strained talk, lies
Untold
Awkward not knowing how to act.
Serpent bites.
Eagle flies, flies away, fear.
Obsession,
a poison.
Lo, Lo, Lo there passes the name
03 mars 2009
When in doubt...it is from Shakespeare...or the bible
02 mars 2009
another poem
Intoxicated,
The green fairy
In the back the faint strings
Sound, Sparkle
Sparkle.
A siren calling ships to disaster
A graveyard of infatuation.
The chemical bond.
Cyanide. Melts bones
Leaving behind a
Red, red
Black
Heart, bone, flesh. Skin
Banners raised catch on the wind
White flags fly in the
Stale air.
Cold, cold, cloud
Artist, paint a picture.
A portrait of Van Gogh
Three to the gut
One to the head.
Pleasant release
Without I cannot survive. Airs
Fourth of a month
She loves me, she loves me not.
Petals rot, wither away
Pale, pale, white.
The boots. Step into, onto a
Life of mine
Cur cur!
Paintings: dark, white, hate, Fate
Passion made.
Crave the laid open dead. Scarlet
Rose.
i speak what i feel not what we ought to say
28 février 2009
Butcher !!!
21 février 2009
still groaning over the loss of character
20 février 2009
It is finally over...a Goodbye to Lysander ...
24 décembre 2008
now ... let it snow ??
24 novembre 2008
If it is square, It's a sonnet
12 novembre 2008
Well here's part 3

04 novembre 2008
Chapter 2 Literature
03 novembre 2008
How to read Literature
12 août 2008
bottom dealing ...
well these are the hands of a noble ranter. this is me botom dealing.
Bottom dealing has been used in to gain the Aces and bloody gain an advantage in a game like in this video shown here . Hope you enjoy the video.
08 juillet 2008
Format for an Essay (Introduction)
Introduction
- Hook
The hook is the thing that gets your reader interested in what you have to say. A good hook is informative and interesting.
there are several different type of hooks :
1. Defining of terms - explain BIG WORDS in your sentence. e.g Happiness, Compassion. The problem about these words is that they mean so many things to different people. Therefore to guide your reader to what specific area that you are trying to focus use the definition of these BIG WORDS.
2. Establish relevance - make the reader feel involved. By using this technique, address what the reader may go through in his or her daily life and how this essay can affect their lives by reading it.
3. Quote somebody - if the topic is of great significance, I'm sure someone would definitely poke his nose into it and say something witty about it. make use of these quotations to give your essay a refined quality about it.
4. Forceful comments - a short direct statement on how you feel on that topic then go on to explain what you mean.
Personally I really like to mix between quotations and defining of terms. I feel it gives a more profound feel to your essay. At the same time by quoting someone you ensure that the reader does not see you as just a opinionated writer, but as a writer who is well researched and knowledgeable in the aspect that you are writing on.
- Topic
Tell your reader what the question is. Treat your reader like a bloody idiot. Explain to the reader what your essay is responding to. e.g " The topic I would like to discuss is ..... "
- Point of View
This is the MOST IMPORTANT part of your essay so listen up. tell your reader your stand. e.g Yes i agree, No i disagree or Yes I agree to a limited extent so on and so forth. Without this Point of view your essay is a goner. It is absolutely suicidal not to write this point. Write it and you will be alright.
- Outline of 3 main Argument
Finally, the 3 main arguments. this section is just a brief outline of what your following paragraphs will be like. It gives your reader a brief view of your essay and this is absolutely essential otherwise your reader will be lost.
As you can see this post is rather long and draggy so I'll stop here. The Introduction of your essay is of utmost importance. Without it your essay will be suicidal. Writing a good introduction is one of the skills of a excellent writer. All teachers look forward to a good introduction, believe me. So Master it and you will do just fine.
As someone once said "Let us watch well our beginnings, and results will manage themselves.